1. Glenn is a comptroller and sen. Royce West asked hime " Is the sky falling in Texas" Falling fossil fuel prices prompted to ask the question. The answer to this question was that we face headwinds in the international markets and if you look at the long term we have a lot of tailwinds behind us. The new prices will take 7.5 percent of the markets value for natural gas and 4.6 percent for oil.
2. Donald trump isn't taking part in the debate because he is a sore loser and stinks at his job. JK its because he wanted to host something for the wounded warriors instead. Its the second to last debate before the Iowa caucuses. i think that this will help his campaign because it shows that he cares for others. On feb. 4th are facing the fact that they might not go to the newly debate. new Hampshires primary is 4 days later.
3. They are fighting mosquitos. They will fight them with repellent that will be given to many civilians. Zika, dengue and microcephaly is the virus that the mosquitos carry, this is what the people are trying to fight off with repellent. They are saying that the mosquitos are being blamed for killing many people, but in reality the virus that the mosquitos carry are what killed so many people. the summer olympics are coming up very soon so they shout get it under control.
4.He added to his classroom policy that no gun can be in his room. McRaven says that we should talk to faculty members so that they know whats going on. This law goes into effect august 1st so the school needs to get ready. The open carry law went into effect on january 1st. Justin Wood said that most people who are concealed carrying are still going to do it.
5. Ken is a Texas attorney, he objected the recent move to resettle Syrian refugees. T hey then would move 7 refugees. He said that the government can't do good background checks. this is a very large concern of his.
6. If they win then they get a 1000 victory. They are doing very well this year with a record of 18-1. They tied for last place in turn overs which is a big factor in sucsessful basketball.
7. I enjoyed the lead of Abe Vigoda written in the new york times. It was way more interesting and it made me want to read more, the other one made me want to stop and read something else. Leads are very important!
Wednesday, January 27, 2016
Monday, January 25, 2016
LEADS MIDDLES ENDS
This assignment was all about how to write a bomb AF story
LEADS- A lot of people like to start a piece of writing with a story or a summery of what the who piece will be about. They also start with some basic information to get the story going and to makes sure that the reader doesn't stop there. This is also usually the place where you introduce characters and how old they are or where they live. A good lead makes a good story.
MIDDLES- Stories that are one sided and very boring and no one wants to read them. The middle paragraph is where you can expand on what you are thinking. you don't want to bring it in to early or too late so this is why you do it in the middle.
END- The most common mistakes about endings is that it has to end with a bang. If you do, do that then you have to spend the whole story setting it up. One way that an ending can be written is to prove a point, so basically prove that you are right, But don't forget to b ring in both sides.
I’m not sure you have to do that. I think that as long as you hold the reader’s attention until you get to that information, it’s all right to bury it a little further down.
this really stuck with me because I believe that this is basically the whole point of a lead and if you have any questions this will answer it.
Burnett, the eldest at 17, walking up Bedford Avenue in Brooklyn, and singing out Mohammed Ali rhymes into the chilly air.
In the lead paragraph it said that you should state who they are and where they live I believe that this is a perfect example of this.
“I’m going to push some dirt around here, I’ve dug lots of other holes in my life, but I’ve never done one like this.”
this stuck with me because it was very funny and I laughed out loud
So I suggest that if anyone should ever get an opportunity to see whatever his name was again in the buff, maybe they want to grab that chain and run with it.
love this because #sass #queen #lit this also made me laugh out loud
It’s a great ending, right? It’s a great ending.
this is basically how I feel about this assignment.
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED
LEADS- A lot of people like to start a piece of writing with a story or a summery of what the who piece will be about. They also start with some basic information to get the story going and to makes sure that the reader doesn't stop there. This is also usually the place where you introduce characters and how old they are or where they live. A good lead makes a good story.
MIDDLES- Stories that are one sided and very boring and no one wants to read them. The middle paragraph is where you can expand on what you are thinking. you don't want to bring it in to early or too late so this is why you do it in the middle.
END- The most common mistakes about endings is that it has to end with a bang. If you do, do that then you have to spend the whole story setting it up. One way that an ending can be written is to prove a point, so basically prove that you are right, But don't forget to b ring in both sides.
I’m not sure you have to do that. I think that as long as you hold the reader’s attention until you get to that information, it’s all right to bury it a little further down.
this really stuck with me because I believe that this is basically the whole point of a lead and if you have any questions this will answer it.
Burnett, the eldest at 17, walking up Bedford Avenue in Brooklyn, and singing out Mohammed Ali rhymes into the chilly air.
In the lead paragraph it said that you should state who they are and where they live I believe that this is a perfect example of this.
“I’m going to push some dirt around here, I’ve dug lots of other holes in my life, but I’ve never done one like this.”
this stuck with me because it was very funny and I laughed out loud
So I suggest that if anyone should ever get an opportunity to see whatever his name was again in the buff, maybe they want to grab that chain and run with it.
love this because #sass #queen #lit this also made me laugh out loud
It’s a great ending, right? It’s a great ending.
this is basically how I feel about this assignment.
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED
Tuesday, January 19, 2016
Story quetsions
1. The significance of this story was to show how the bot lived his daily life and about how much the girl knew about him. Also how you can love at a young age. The story is told as if the little girl is telling it and she only talks about the little boy.
2. The main character the little boy is the main character but is never the narrative. This all about what the girls thinks about him and his life so this might be different from if the boy was telling it because he might have different opinions on what he does.
3.The writer includes all of her questions within the article to give contexts. She also makes it seem like she is a 10 year old girl who is in love with this boy. Or thats what I thought at first. She also followed him throughout the day as apposed to a lifetime or a longer period of time.
4. The writer most likely used a few sources such as school people, parents, friends and possible others that see him throughout the day. As I said earlier she included her questions within the story to give context.
5. She asked "who is the most important women in the world" he said "none I Don't know
"I have a lot of girlfriends", "but I don't remember their names she probably asked something along the lines of what do you think about girls.
2. The main character the little boy is the main character but is never the narrative. This all about what the girls thinks about him and his life so this might be different from if the boy was telling it because he might have different opinions on what he does.
3.The writer includes all of her questions within the article to give contexts. She also makes it seem like she is a 10 year old girl who is in love with this boy. Or thats what I thought at first. She also followed him throughout the day as apposed to a lifetime or a longer period of time.
4. The writer most likely used a few sources such as school people, parents, friends and possible others that see him throughout the day. As I said earlier she included her questions within the story to give context.
5. She asked "who is the most important women in the world" he said "none I Don't know
"I have a lot of girlfriends", "but I don't remember their names she probably asked something along the lines of what do you think about girls.
David Bowie
David Bowie was a great musician and influencer. He should be remembered by the way he moved people through his music and actions. His life was full of many up and downs that inspired people on the daily. He had a colorful lifestyle and was loved by many. He definitely left his mark on society with his quirky personality and will be missed. RIP
I initially read David Bowie, then I read the articles about Glenn Frey and Alan Rickman. All of the stories started off with the base of what they are known for or their big accomplishments in life. And also how they died and what age.They would all then go on to explain in more detail how things accord in the order they happened. It all was written in a sweet way with no negative comments.
I initially read David Bowie, then I read the articles about Glenn Frey and Alan Rickman. All of the stories started off with the base of what they are known for or their big accomplishments in life. And also how they died and what age.They would all then go on to explain in more detail how things accord in the order they happened. It all was written in a sweet way with no negative comments.
Friday, January 8, 2016
Tell Readers A Good Story
1. Hawthorne offers this premise for the chapter: "We're not collecting data. We want to tell stories." How does he suggest reporters go about realizing this objective?
Hawthorne is all about a good story and he states in his chapter that you will accomplish a good story by a following a certain curriculum to achieve the bets result. This process consist of many steps, the first one being that when you began a story you ask yourself "what is this story really about" all stories that are written have an overall theme. This theme doesn't have to be a big message but just one sentence will do. Now you could say the theme of your story is soccer. But thats not a theme, it might be the start to the theme but not the whole theme. What about soccer really sticks out? That would be the theme. Going back to the first thing Hawthorne said "we're not collecting data. We want to tell stories" data is good for many things like a biography but not for a good story that catches readers attention. Any story has the potential to be great, it just depends on the way you present it.
2. On page 41, Hawthorne says that you shouldn't write stories that are the metaphorical equivalent of microwave popcorn. For the rest of the chapter, he presents his recipe to cook up a much more delicious, satisfying story. What is his complete recipe for writing an excellent story?
Popcorn is ready to go in 90 seconds, but thats not how long you want the reader to look at your story before they get bored and move on to the next one. The recipe that Hawthorne has come up with will help the reader stay engaged and overall enjoy the piece. Literary Devices are always good to include in your story because it will entertain your reader throughout the story without boring them. The second ingredient to a great story is drama. All sorts of drama works it just all depends on the reader and the audience you're reaching out too. With drama come characters, each person has a unique story and you should try to include it in yours. Conflict can e found anywhere whether its kids fighting over a piece of candy or two countries fighting over land. Either way its always engages the reader and keeps them on the edge of their seat. You might be thinking, how do you produce conflict or drama in my story? Well dialogue can help you create any type of situation within your story. It can create a tone or just a interesting topic. The next thing for wonderful story is something that can be found anywhere. Even the first sentence;Anticipation. This could be the first thing the reader sees which would encourage them to continue on and see what else your story has in-store. Somewhere in your story you need a climax which is the high point of the story, or in other word the main event. This is what the reader has been looking for the whole time. Most stories end in a cliff hanger, although the this can be interesting, this can also be frustrating to the reader. You try to at least almost solve the problem with a resolution. This would be the last ingredient that would complete the recipe to a fabulous story.
Hawthorne is all about a good story and he states in his chapter that you will accomplish a good story by a following a certain curriculum to achieve the bets result. This process consist of many steps, the first one being that when you began a story you ask yourself "what is this story really about" all stories that are written have an overall theme. This theme doesn't have to be a big message but just one sentence will do. Now you could say the theme of your story is soccer. But thats not a theme, it might be the start to the theme but not the whole theme. What about soccer really sticks out? That would be the theme. Going back to the first thing Hawthorne said "we're not collecting data. We want to tell stories" data is good for many things like a biography but not for a good story that catches readers attention. Any story has the potential to be great, it just depends on the way you present it.
2. On page 41, Hawthorne says that you shouldn't write stories that are the metaphorical equivalent of microwave popcorn. For the rest of the chapter, he presents his recipe to cook up a much more delicious, satisfying story. What is his complete recipe for writing an excellent story?
Popcorn is ready to go in 90 seconds, but thats not how long you want the reader to look at your story before they get bored and move on to the next one. The recipe that Hawthorne has come up with will help the reader stay engaged and overall enjoy the piece. Literary Devices are always good to include in your story because it will entertain your reader throughout the story without boring them. The second ingredient to a great story is drama. All sorts of drama works it just all depends on the reader and the audience you're reaching out too. With drama come characters, each person has a unique story and you should try to include it in yours. Conflict can e found anywhere whether its kids fighting over a piece of candy or two countries fighting over land. Either way its always engages the reader and keeps them on the edge of their seat. You might be thinking, how do you produce conflict or drama in my story? Well dialogue can help you create any type of situation within your story. It can create a tone or just a interesting topic. The next thing for wonderful story is something that can be found anywhere. Even the first sentence;Anticipation. This could be the first thing the reader sees which would encourage them to continue on and see what else your story has in-store. Somewhere in your story you need a climax which is the high point of the story, or in other word the main event. This is what the reader has been looking for the whole time. Most stories end in a cliff hanger, although the this can be interesting, this can also be frustrating to the reader. You try to at least almost solve the problem with a resolution. This would be the last ingredient that would complete the recipe to a fabulous story.
Friday, December 11, 2015
Kim Kardashians buttocks???
Kim Kardashian is known for her amazing looks and bright personality! One thing that always has people attention is her buttocks. There has always been suspicion about whether or not her voluptuous buttocks is real. Today you will figure out the truth about what behind Kim. There are rumors and suspicion, but what does Kim say??
People of all classes and races have found a way to shame Kim for her amazing physique. She is constantly pounded with question, no matter where she goes. People judge her whether it's all natural or fake. Most people in the public say that she has buttocks implant or injection. They even insist that she uses an app on her Instagram photos to get the perfect figure. “making fun of me pregnant and making fun of me trying to lose weight now shame on you. I'm not perfect but I will never conform to your skinny standards sorry!” Kim said. She's in the public view everyday and is shamed for the way she looks, what more can she do!
Kim flaunts what's she got all over social media. She's proud of what's she's done and is very confident. On June 27, 2011 Kim had enough will all the critics about her buttocks and took a trip to the doctor's office for x-ray to prove to the public that she has no butt implants. Her sister Kourtney Kardashian came to support her and to prove to the public that there are no implants in Kim's buttocks. Now you might be thinking how would a x-ray prove that her buttocks is real? This was one of the main reasons why Kim brought along Kourtney. Kourtney has breast implants so that they would show up on the x-ray. They would then later compare Kourtney's breast to Kim's buttocks to show that there were no implants. “if i were to have a fake ass, wouldn’t it be dimple free?” Kim says. Kim is never going to stop the people from making up stuff about her “butt” she sure can limit them.
What does a celebrity doctor say about all of this? A celebrity doctor Dr. Douglas Steinbrech explains the different procedures people like Kim Kardashian and Nicki Minaj can do to make their buttocks look larger. He says that the implants would show up on an x-ray so Kim is telling the truth about that one, but there are other options. “ The x-ray would most likely show fat injections,as microcalls. These are tiny calcium specs associated with fat injections” Dr. Steinbrech said. The real question is whether or not the imaging process is performed and read by multiple Radiologist. Without the right eyes you might not be able to see the fat injections on a x-ray. He believes that Kim and other famous people could have had some help with their behinds.
In conclusion we may never know the truth about Kim Kardashian's buttocks. We heard from what the public had to say, and the famous doctor. All you can do at this point is make up your opinion without shaming her for a choice she did or didn't make. Everyone should feel confident with themselves, no matter what others think!
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