This assignment was all about how to write a bomb AF story
LEADS- A lot of people like to start a piece of writing with a story or a summery of what the who piece will be about. They also start with some basic information to get the story going and to makes sure that the reader doesn't stop there. This is also usually the place where you introduce characters and how old they are or where they live. A good lead makes a good story.
MIDDLES- Stories that are one sided and very boring and no one wants to read them. The middle paragraph is where you can expand on what you are thinking. you don't want to bring it in to early or too late so this is why you do it in the middle.
END- The most common mistakes about endings is that it has to end with a bang. If you do, do that then you have to spend the whole story setting it up. One way that an ending can be written is to prove a point, so basically prove that you are right, But don't forget to b ring in both sides.
I’m not sure you have to do that. I think that as long as you hold the reader’s attention until you get to that information, it’s all right to bury it a little further down.
this really stuck with me because I believe that this is basically the whole point of a lead and if you have any questions this will answer it.
Burnett, the eldest at 17, walking up Bedford Avenue in Brooklyn, and singing out Mohammed Ali rhymes into the chilly air.
In the lead paragraph it said that you should state who they are and where they live I believe that this is a perfect example of this.
“I’m going to push some dirt around here, I’ve dug lots of other holes in my life, but I’ve never done one like this.”
this stuck with me because it was very funny and I laughed out loud
So I suggest that if anyone should ever get an opportunity to see whatever his name was again in the buff, maybe they want to grab that chain and run with it.
love this because #sass #queen #lit this also made me laugh out loud
It’s a great ending, right? It’s a great ending.
this is basically how I feel about this assignment.
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED
It's hard to follow your quotes and responses because of how you formatted the text, but I only saw four quotes not the required five.
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